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January 5th 2012, 02:48 PM
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leprochaun
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Yea, the bomb bug is pretty annoying. I really liked how items stacked though, well, except for the swords. It kinda ended with like no warning. Too bad you didn't finish that first trial, and then end it.

You also might have used too many ellipses.

Like, "Talking talking…" you used an ellipse because you don't have room to finish, but then you start the next sentence with, "… more talking" So if you put it together it'd look like, "Talking talking…… more talking."
You only need one set.